SLJ – Comic Step it Up

Bonjour, Bloggers!

Just like my previous post, I am doing the Comic Quest, but this time I am doing the Step-It-Up! For the step it up, you get to create your own story (not related to the beach) and pick your own background. My background was the city.

For this story, I made it about a man who lives alone and really wants a dog. He passes by a shop and finds the perfect one! But what happens? I loved creating this because it reminded me of my dogs and adopting them.

Here is my story:

What do you think? Would you change anything about this? Do you have any dogs?

One thought on “SLJ – Comic Step it Up

  1. Kia ora Emilee,

    Again, your story has impressed me. I enjoyed the flow of your story and the fact that it was related to a very special topic. I also thought that it was great that you have asked questions at the end of the post. That tells me that you know how to write a quality blog post.

    To answer your questions – yes, I have a dog. We adopted her, like the guy in your story. I think that is why I enjoyed the story so much. I wouldn’t change anything. You have a good beginning, middle and end. Ka pai e hoa!

    Keep up the great learning and blogging,
    🙂 Sharon – Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader

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