Bonjour, Bloggers!
Just like my previous post, I am doing the Comic Quest, but this time I am doing the Step-It-Up! For the step it up, you get to create your own story (not related to the beach) and pick your own background. My background was the city.
For this story, I made it about a man who lives alone and really wants a dog. He passes by a shop and finds the perfect one! But what happens? I loved creating this because it reminded me of my dogs and adopting them.
Here is my story:
What do you think? Would you change anything about this? Do you have any dogs?
Kia ora Emilee,
Again, your story has impressed me. I enjoyed the flow of your story and the fact that it was related to a very special topic. I also thought that it was great that you have asked questions at the end of the post. That tells me that you know how to write a quality blog post.
To answer your questions – yes, I have a dog. We adopted her, like the guy in your story. I think that is why I enjoyed the story so much. I wouldn’t change anything. You have a good beginning, middle and end. Ka pai e hoa!
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
🙂 Sharon – Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader